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Objective
To work to the height of my potential in order to better
serve my employer. By using the skills I have acquired
through my college education and past job
experience I will be an added asset to my employer.
Summary
Included in this resume are details about my professional
and educational experience. If you require any more
information, or have any questions at all, please feel free
to contact me at the number listed above. Thank you for your time.
Experience
Finlay Jewelry, Cincinnati, Ohio
Operations Clerical, 2008-2009
Balancing of daily transactions
Inventoring merchandise worth a total value of U.S.$2,000,000.
Responsible for all operations aspect of store
Supervises staff of 8 sales associates, resolves customer
service issues and makes management decisions in absence of store manager.
Trak Staffing Solutions, Cincinnati, Ohio
Clerical Assistant, 2008

Working beneath Records Manager in Standard Textile’s legal department.

Inventoring contents and nature of unlabeled boxes of
company hard copy files; organizing data in Excel;
reboxing, relabeling and properly ordering of hard copy boxes.

Various clerical and office duties as needed.
Kelly Services, North Canton, Ohio
Customer Service/Collections, 2007
1 Customer service and rentention for GE Moneybank lines of credit
2 Collections on past due accounts

Ryan Alternative Staffing, North Canton, Ohio
Customer Service Representative, 2006-2007
1 Technical support and troubleshooting
for Overhead Door’s product line in in-bound call center.
2 Sales of clients’ product accessories.
3 Maintaining customer brand loyalty through prompt and responsive customer service.
McDonalds, Navarre, Ohio
Midnight Shift Supervisor, 2004-2006
Customer Service
Equipment Care and Maintenance
Cash Handling
Flexibility in Availability and in performing multiple roles
Demonstrated high efficiency: Franchise was considering
suspending 24 hour service at that location, shift was
maintained after transfer; profit became at least $7,000 a month.
Teamwork
Shearers Foods Inc, Brewster, Ohio

Packer, Maintenance, 2003-2004

Product Packaging
Product quality selection
Store maintenance, equipment care

Hardees, Navarre, Ohio

Senior Crew, 2000-2003

Customer Service
Training Junior Crew

Education

University of Cincinnati Raymond Walters College, Blue Ash, Ohio

B.S. Radiation Sciences, 2010

Cuyahoga Community College, Corporate College, Warrensville Heights, Ohio

Certificate. Insurance: Life, Accident, Health and Variables, 2006

Stark State College of Technology, North Canton, Ohio

Business Administration and Marketing, 2003-2004

Fairless High School, Navarre, Ohio

High School Diploma, 2002

Other Experience

Stark Raving Mad, Kent Stark, North Canton, Ohio 2002-2004

Improvisation comedy group, thinking quickly on one’s feet in front of an audience
Teamwork
Creativity

Boy Scouts of America

Eagle Scout Award, 2000

Thespian Society

Thespian Award, 2001

References

Available Upon Request

In the body of your report, write at least six paragraphs to answer the following: How do incentives that reward innovation and creativity affect a company’s bottom line? How are productivity and business success (as measured by profit) affected by such incentives? Are they worth the time, effort, and expense required? Specifically, how do innovations in the following areas affect productivity?

* research and development
* physical capital (new equipment, larger facilities, etc.)
* human capital
– training employees
– hiring more experienced (but more expensive) employees

What are some examples of things I could improve in “research and development”?

I’m drawing blanks…ugh

Thanks for any help.

My bachelor’s Degree in English Language Translation has provided me with the ability of searching up to date information regarding coaching, lifeguard and fitness assessment.
I am currently self-studying the duties of being a perfect lifeguard and swim coach, which I feel will enhance my abilities as a lifeguard and coach. My volunteer background has included how to save people’s lives at the time of danger.
My main subjects of interest are swimming, volleyball, basketball, ping-pong, badminton, running, roller-skating … . I want to gain enough knowledge in all major fields of sport, though I want to focus on the mentioned fields later.
In Addition to my mentioned capabilities, I am attending in Aerobics classes. I think in my future career as a Manager in an International sports working field, this experience will also be useful.
I have always been enthusiastic in sports. Because it has several effects in our lives including: Physical fitness, stress reduction, social facilitation, self-steam, achievement motivation, social facilitation, competition, … .
I volunteered over 100 hours at Milad and Fajr Swimming Pool (2011), which gave me the opportunity to experience and enjoy several different aspects of the lifeguard field.

Furthermore I have passed a training course as employee in a travel agency confirmed by the Tourism Organization, which I think would be helpful for me to choose my profile at university as “Sport Management and Tourism”.

To choose the right University for my academic studies I already visited some Universities in Germany and also ……………. University. I talked to Mr. …………..who guided me in my academic planning. After having known about the course structure and visiting the campus I am sure that the University of ……………..would be the opt University for me to continue my studies.
Sincerely
……….

For those who are older, do you remember watching a movie called Dreamscape with Dennis Quaid back in 1984 or 85. This movie is from the book called The Dream Master by Roger J. Zelanzy (he won the Nebula award for this book back in 1965 or 66).

The movie was that the government or a private company was training certain people how utilize and manipulate their dreams by having lucid dreams and with complete training, were hired as dream assassins to go into top crucial government dreams and kill them or change history. It was pretty cool but raw for the 1980s.

I do hope this movie is better than the Cell or compare to The Dream of a LifeTime, and more on the line of Dark City.

I do understand that people are influenced by other books and movies throughout the past 60 years. Well, that is how we learn and get our ideas from and incorporate them into the mainstream of modern creativity. Let’s face it, without Bram Stoker’s Dracula, there probably would have never been the Twilight movies.

Oh yes…..

To keep this on a professional level and without name calling, I am very interested in watching this movie, but do not want to waste my time. Chris Nolan is a great visual director, and I loved the Dark Night…..so basically if you understood my question, I wanted to know your views on the “movie’s” promos/trailers, not what you perceived of my emotions or attitude towards the movie (because I have none — I have not seen the movie yet).

What are your views and what do you think? Thanks guys!!!!

Then I watched Legion, and it’s the same thing. Slow start, not much detail in explaining things, not much creativity in story line or characters then suddenly the end comes and boom it’s over, no closure.

Movies used to have content and substance, now they’re all getting plain while holding a lot of potential that’s never used. Why is this?

The 60s and 70s are now seen as the golden age of rock and roll having acts like The Who, The Beatles, The Rolling Stones, The Doors, Pink Floyd and Led Zeppelin. But in reality, if music ever took a huge drop in thoughtfulness, wasn’t it right there? Once music got rolling, classical music was what was popular and for a couple hundred years, musicians were unquestionably more talented, and understood music better than all of the non-classical musicians of the 20th century.

Then there were radios and rags, swing bands and jazz. Most musicologists will say that it was during the 1920s that music went from an art to a form of popular media. Most popular musicians were no longer classically trained, but were self-taught like many of the musicians from the third type of music, folk and traditional. But people like Joplin and later Ellington injected real music training into these new genres and legitimized them. A few decades later, some of the 20th centuries veritable music geniuses turned jazz into the sophisticated, well respected music it is today. These were people like Miles Davis, Thelonious Monk, Charlie Parker, John Coltrane and many more. This happened during the 50s and 60s. Meanwhile, blues and rock and roll became the popular styles. Jazz was saved when it proved that it could be just as intricately melodic as classical music while also being more complex rhythmically. Rock and blues have structures that restrict them from being as complex as classical pieces. Talk about a huge let down. Music couldn’t get simpler. No geniuses ever saved rock and roll.

Progressive music acts were, well, the most progressive acts when it came to the structures. Progressive bands incorporated jazz into their songs and in that way, the thin stream of art that was still coursing through music was able to reach a new horizon. But it was in the 60s that jazz was overtaken, and thats when music took a shot. Modern rock musicians are just as good as the ones from the 60s. The only thing that the 60s had that no other decade did was The Beatles. Otherwise, rock music has only changed in its accessibility and in its diversification. Today there are more bands, and more creativity in popular music than ever before. The 60s may have established a prevailing sound but nothing has happened since then that can quite measure up to the time when kids decided that they preferred four chords to a complex, thoughtful progression.
I have two problems with every. single. answer. One, no one understood what I was asking, probably my fault. Second, you guys have good points but none of you are winning this argument in my mind. Addressing my references to classical music, I am not talking about popular music from every time period. I’m sure I don’t have to tell you that classical music was the popular music before the 20s. I never said anything that implied traditional or folk music werent around before the 20s. Please don’t try to make me look stupid with illogical arguments.
Other person, I like music from 40 years ago, I like music from today and if I were to live for another 40 years, I would still enjoy the current music.
Sorry, I AM* talking about popular music from every time period. When musicologists categorize music, popular music started to rise up in the 20th century, of course I can’t say that there was a point when this became more popular than what we now call classical music. But I like to say it started with the radio, and I don’t think that is too wrong.
GNR and Led Zep are not geniuses of the same caliber as Miles Davis and John Coltrane. These are the points I’m making: It is hard for rock’s structure to facilitate genius. I call plenty of rock musicians geniuses but at a different level. With that said, it seems that the generation growing up in the 60s decided to drift to genres that were not about the genius of the music. As many of you said, catchiness and complexity are their own categories of genius. In the 60s, music lost complexity, please make counterpoints to that argument, I really believe that you can. Conversely, tell me at one point since that time, that things got worse. Imagine listening to jazz and classical your entire life and then hearing this music that has simple rhythms and progressions, you would think it was hardly a respectable genre at all. That’s how “The Greatest Generation” felt. I don’t think that the “Baby Boomers” are warranted to feel the same way though.
Smiley: When you say I’m being subjective, that is somewhat true, as long as youre sure to put the word “popular” in front of music. I’m not debating what music is though. The subjects would be the modern people of any given time, yes. When I say progressive, I am primarily talking about Canterbury Scene bands. I really don’t consider John Mayall & the Bluesbreakers, Love or Cream (any of the psychedelic or blues bands you listed) to be progressive bands. The internet has created much, much more music. But there are still so many pop and experimental bands today that I love. There are plenty of successful acts today that are nothing but copies of other bands. And perhaps internet culture has shined a light on those. But there is still the same amount of decent bands (and in my opinion, more in fact) than ever in rock’s history.
There are plenty of obscure progressive bands from the past that I will never know about. I don’t particularly care though, I think I would find that 90% of them would be boring by my standards/taste. And it is certainly hard to play in a progressive band without being a talented musician. I think the same is true for modern jam bands though. And I feel just the same way about them, most are boring beyond the main notable ones.
I will admit that I tried to elicit strong reactions with the wording of my question. But when you say something like “nothing new in the last 30 years”, I think the gloves must come off. Just a completely unacceptable thing to say, especially from R&Ps most talented best answer getter, and Smiley, possibly the most knowledgeable prog aficionado on here. I’m guessing youre talk about the garage/post punk revivals. There’s a reason it’s qualified with “revival”, it’s not the same thing. Interpol would love it if someone told them that they sound exactly like Joy Division. But the fact is, theyre not even trying for that. Also, the late 80s is when things started to die? That just so happens to be when Radiohead started, please tell me who Radiohead was copying when they made OK Computer.